Ohhhh my, I love it. Well done Kim, aren't you glad I made you join :P
Tonight is our show!!!! Migzz and I were downtown yesterday, and we left a nice message on Speaker's Corner, I hope it gets aired!!! ... Brilliant poem!

Deep poem! Touching and heart wrenching. Wonderfully written :)

Nicely done, great job!

Wow, some originality. i really like your style, youve taken a predictable subject and really given it a new approach. well done and keep it up!!!

Truely impressive mastery of language, I love the imagery you use in this poem, stunning 5/5