I like it the repetition of the phrase I Love You Baby, Can't You Tell?

I think that the repetition of
'I Love you baby, Can you tell?'
Is very effective - but why is there a capital L on Love and C on Can? If you were personifying Love, then understandably it would have a capital, but you're not. So I suggest you take away those capitals. Your

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Rhyming pattern worked really well too, great poem.

Peace. [Sole]

I agree with Sole but osme of the lines seemed a bit over done. I mean, it could stand out like your other poem about the flower did. But it just seemed lost to me. I liked it, though