Great write, powerful and yet fulid, and shows good emtion.

Omg! coleman, I was going to call you and tell you I love you and that I want to get back together with you..But everytime I call theres no answer. or you have to go. I love you, and I want you!

That was an awsome poem..i loked it alot...although im kinda of a squeemish person...and cant stand the sight of blood from the wrist...and that gave me an image of that...and an image of the one i love..she cutts alot...i hate it...i just want to slap her for doing it...but any way nice job 5/5 for sure

That...was tuly amazing! I have absolutley no clue how you managed to make this poem sound a million and one times better then all the others I have read with the same story line. It had this constant beat to it, almost like an unforgettable song; and I could in fact really imagine speaking those very meaningful words to myself if I were in such a situation. The emotions you grasped were fantastic, and you conveyed them equally and understandabley among the rest of the powerfull phrases.
Well done and keep up the great effort!

Much love and God bless,
FalLEn*-

P.S: --When I usually leave a 'P.S' I quote most people from a certain part of their poem if it was particularly good- but here; I can't do that but i'll tell you stanzas 2,3 & 4 were amazing! =P

WOW THAT IS SO GOOD!!!! THAT IS SO DIFFERENT BUT ITS HOT. YOUR SO TALENTED KEEP ON WRITTIN. YOUR HOME GIRL
LANEY..... YA KNOW!!!!!!1

This was really really good. Sad, but good.

This poem is amazing.. full of emotion. i can sort of understand the way you feel about needing to see your blood to feel real.
-sarah