Wow....that was beautiful. i loved it. it was just wow. i cant think of anything to say. Keep up the great work.
Emma 5/5
P.s i couldnt find the other poem you wanted me to read srry.

Hey, nice job esp. the end is very interesting. Keep it up!

Oh wow i love it ~clap clap~
great job

love alwys tabby

Love the whole things...specialyl "you're the one who'll ned up alone." greeat jobb. 5/5!

Lissa

I can really feel your pain and relate to this is so many ways..nicely done on the wording ..5/5

This is great! 5/5 Good job =]

luv natz x0x

"Empty Promises
Fill a void
All the trust you built
Uncaringly destroyed"

You are one with words and I don't know how you put them together like this so that they have such an impact on your readers. This is indeed a quite angry yet sad poem and from that very first stanza you had me hooked!

I'm off to read some more...keep writing!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

That was good, it was so deep and powerful
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