I like this poem, but on first sight I sighed that I had decided to read a fairly large clump of text, I like the content of the poem, which I forced myself to read, and I ended up realizing that this poem is better than it looks on first sight.

I have some suggestions for the format, such as seperating it into stanzas and breaking off the lines before they reach the other side of the page, other than that great job I really likd this poem, keep up the good work.

I don't know how this poem doesn't have a five from everyone that's read it. It's absolutely amazing, I can get the feeling so well that I feel like I wrote it myself. Great job here.

I like it. i love the message as my dream is to be 10 again. lol. no but i love the imagery and stuff. especially the snow and teh dirty. that was good. some of it had some flow problems. but overall good job.