Comments : The Stairwell

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Weird distracting numberness man. but good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by erratic hippie

    Aidyn! this is the most introspective piece i've ever read from your collection - you've taken the palindrome form to highly refined heights. it all seems so carefully calculated (and the numbers are a nice touch). i may just have to wring your neck if you tell me it didn't take long to create. i could meditate on this all day!

  • 18 years ago

    by Krystle

    A) Amazing.
    B) Stupendous.
    C) Splendiferous.
    D) All of the above.

    *whispers* I picked 'D'. :P

    Cheers, Krystle

  • 17 years ago

    by AnJolina

    OMG THAT IS SO COOL! i like how u used numbers in place of letters and that it repeats the same words but there switched!! i thnk that is so cool!!!!!
    ~!ugly & unloved!~

  • 17 years ago

    by ~Amy~

    Wow, this really really great! i love the word "incandescence" (i probably spelled it wrong too! haha) keep it up!
    ~Amy~