Comments : Black Blood

  • Well done. some good word play and imagery in this piece. i particularly like the lines:

    "...Life is petty, fragile and short,
    For what we attempt of any sort..."

    "...My world so easily ripped by pain,
    For I question if I was ever sane..."

    "...So let the darkness consume me,
    For I wish to die in this misery..."

    good write. -hannah