I really like this, well done

Excellent poem. GREEEEEAAT!!! WOW! Wonderful! 5/5!

I loved it..the flow was surprisingly great although the stanza form changed, which was effective in the least!
I find myself asking similar questions at similar hours..it's getting me no where!
Nice writing
>torn -x.x.x-

Great job! i really liked it. 5/5*

"I'm still living at a constant 4 am
I can't figure out who I am"

This was a very interesting rhyme, I liked it. The poem itself was short, but it was pretty good for one of the many short poems that I have read. I liked it.

Ooo nice. i like. esp this: And my soul is not a dying flame

Perpetual morning feeling, maybe lightheaded... your head swimming... ive been there. the poem was ok, maybe a little short but fairly well written, good job.

I like it, it's quite original. Though, my dreams are better than my reality, so I rather sleep. I loved the end, specially "Let me pretend that I'm not in pain". It's true, sometimes all we want is to pretend for a while, sometimes even forever.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby