Wow, this was so chilling and the ending was unexpected, but excellent! Awesome and insanely intense!

Wow! how can I compete with that!!:O

Wow

thats all i havta say. haha

wow...

5/5

--Jasmyn

Great ^^

That was very thrilling to read! well done!

Enjoyable my friend... Hate, a wonderful subject to convey in a poem (Well it is when you do it). Superb writing Bill... More of these to come?

I like the images this poem conjures up, as well as the feelings it invokes. It's well written, and the vocabulary is used well. Very well done.

That was stunning, so well articulated and amazingly expressed. 5/5, keep it up!