It's decent: Are you an emotional writer? If you are and tend ot base off your emotions then this is really good because it helps heal those pesky scars and build your self-esteem but if you want to be more of a poetic writer, this is the best place to start:

Break up your poem into different stanza's, it's easier to read and it helps improve the flow. It doesn't have to be structured, free verse is good.

Emotions are the best, but you can help add more details to explain why you feela certain way with descriptions or metaphors. For example, "What can I say if there are no words" could be, "I'm silent for words vanish into the air."

Grammar is a personal choice, it works with and without it.

Read poetry, different styles, different thoughts, seeing is how you can improve what you think could be better, not by stealing ideas, which I'm not saying you would of course, but by saying, "I could do better than that." and striving to get better than the person you had read.