I like it alot. i'll try to think of a title for it if you want me to. 5/5. keep up the great writing.

I love it.. it was great poem, beautiful :):) keep the great work going :)

Its a very good poem

OMG girl...This poem is way better than mine!!! Your a great writer and a great friend...keep up the good work!!!
lylas,
*Shelby*

Grrrreaaaat work. lol i can't think of anything else than MPH right now lol

pili

I need u to sign in right now :) haha it's ur falt SSG it's all weird now!!!!! :S :S and uh, NP is going to call like..now ahhhh

cazuela.

Nice poem! i'll try 2 think of a title 4 it.

I liked this poem.. it was nicely written and set out.. Good job. 5/5