Very interesting! i didn't quite understand it tho lol.. but the parts I did understand I really liked! so good job man!

Very good, i read about the "indigo children" and its interesting. Great job and take care XXXXX
JL

Nicely done, the flow was amazing! Almost as if I were singing your words out loud, awesome poem!

Very mystifying. i like it.

*huggles* u kno no one could EVER take your place either! you r the greatest. And yes, ive heard unwritten. i

Great job....awesome flow....very deep with dark edges....great job...5/5