This is great...loads of layers to it 5/5

It's great Levi.. and ur so right.. I could'nt agree more..

Melly

Wow... i loveddd that one hehe!! I can relate... great poem :)...!!

xox pixie

Ok wow my boyfriend is so like that all he wants is to hold, love and care for me thats so sweet no wonder u hjave a girlfriend its because u treat girls like they are pupose t be treated.

luvies
Ur pet
Jenna

I wish I could find a guy that just wanted to hold me. But I haven't found him yet. Still looking.
Heather 5/5

Its really good and true

I wish i had a guy that wantd to hold me really great poem i loved it

You see? that's the way I see things, perverts like that give lovers like me a bad name..
d@mn Perver7s

We move on but the pains still there hiding in our hearts
causing us not to care, why must this stuff happen to all
those good inside...But never happen to the pricks that
just wanna screw you in their frickin car.

those lines, stood out to me, it's true that all the bad stuff seems to happen to the nice guys, but never the guys that don't really want to be serious. You know it was really nice to read something like thses from a guys point of view and that a guy actaully realizes what does happen and it does hurt in the end. I loved your poem and I love you for writing such a great poem, My favorite part was the end, because there are guys that aren't "players" even though it's hard to tell, there are some guys who care. I really love your poem, how you wrote it, the words you used in them, and the flow, but most of all the message, 5/5!!!

I'd like to thank everyone on their comment's, and yeah I thought it was time that someone wrote about this. I'm happy that you all liked this and could relate. It makes my day.