Hey, this is an amazingly powerful and emotional poem. i really liked the opening verse,

Come I invited you,
Dont be rude again,
Come,come watch me burn,
Watch me ignite, my friend

and this bit,

Ill stitch my own lips,
I wont tell of your secret,
Have my f**king trust,
I dont care if you keep it.

great work, keep going, you're obviously extremely talented.

Forsaken Redeemer
xXx

p.s. thanks for all your comments, they mean loads :0)

Wow that was a very passionate peice. Very descriptive and some great imagery. Awesome!

I like the way you expressed this. I'm so very sorry of what you go through. I have had my bad times with my dad, people and gender can differ, but it still holds the same pain, so I'm very happy you write about it. 5/5.

Great Poem! I like the part "Ill breathe my ash in your face." Sorry i never replied....i havnt been on this site in ages but i just read through most of your poetry and love them!