Nice poem....great job
5/5

Very True- So often I would rather here i hate you than the silence caused by all that is left unsaid! Nice Job

^She's right, silence cuts deeper than some of the sharpest words. Another sad, yet wonderful poem. Good job, keep smiling.
~Jaime

That there is sad, good job

Your poem rang true to me. I would rather someone say something anything then nothing at all. This wa an aswome poem

HEy, Great poem. Short but sweet. I know how you feel, it sucks when someone you love leaves and you know thye arent commin back. Be happy tho, everything happens for a reason i guess!!
~~Sweetie

Wow, very sad and full of emotion. You could really feel the pain from every word. I loved this poem, nothing that I could see needed to be fixed. Keep it just the way it is.

Splendid, 5/5

West

Wow i really like this one good job i can really feel the emotion well done :D xxALLYxx

Wow! you're a great writer! keep it up!

I loved that...It wasnt very long, but with the way you write, it doesnt have to be! Great job sweety!! You're so talented:D

~Always4You~

Wow. that was really good.
Ad i know just how you feel!!! like you said to me. you are my perfect split side!!
Lots of Love♥
teenage tragedy♥

Wow!!!!i can totaly relate to this poem!!!!! it is great!!!! 5/5!!!

xoxo
JESSiE