Awsome poem. I really liked it. *5/5*

This poem is very unique, your words are descriptive and they capture the imagination! you have done well!
luv em

Jolly good write, that was simply smashing, seriously being bad without realization. I think you did a superb job on that using a sort of what the duce is that word, uh, symbolism, I'll need to try to incorparate some symbolism in my own writing, mines kinda bland compaired :(

Wow-an absolutely amazing poem. you are so talented. please keep it up!

Eep, very well written! The part that made me go 'ah, woah' was the part that said,

'Of God's whisper and Satan's call'

^_^

Good job.

-Tony

Cool idea...i enjoyed reading it....nice flow....great write....
Emma 5/5

God�s --supposed to be god's???
Satan�s--satan's??
don�t--don't??

But to my surprise it was a dose of reality,
Something I needed but haven't heard,
I must have read it 5 or 6 times,
Trying to make sense of every word.

my fav stanza!!!
great job. touchy subject!!

Great topic. I loved the message portrayed in this poem, very strong.

Your flow seems to switch back and forth.

Other than that, excellent job, Keep it up. By the ways, if you're not in a poetry club, you should join Poetry Analysis and Breakdown. ^-^

I agree that the flow can sometimes be a litle off - But in such a well written poem, it really doesn't seem to make a huge difference :) Keep it up.

Peace. [Sole]

I like the poem but your rhythm was kind of bad =\ still good though *thumbs up*

That was a very good poem, and it had a lot of meaning behind it. Great job, 5/5

Ravyn

Good poem! Very different, I really thought it was going to be a little different........but it had a nice twist great job

Please check out four pf my poem you choose,
-annmarie

Wow...you pretty much summed up the way i feel :/ amazing poem 5/5

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