Comments : The Beach

  • 18 years ago

    by kareeenuhhh

    THATS CUTE!!! lol...luvs alwayz
    *~KaRiNa~*

  • 18 years ago

    by happyGIRL

    Good

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Great descipitions, really captures the atmosphere, very well written xx

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    Real descriptive...i can picture it...good job. well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Omg i love the ocean it's the only place that i'm happy anymore....great poem though 5/5...it flowed together really really well
    auna