Comments : I don't think I'll ever be Safe again...

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Great poem I really liked it. Sometimes the flow is off and I think the format could use a little work though. but anyways, the meaning of the poem is a good one, and I like your rhymes.

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    Beautiful poem, deserves the 5. You must of loved your friend.