by JJ
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In the second stanza the rhyming seemed a little forced...other then that, no critiques from me. what an awesome write! I love the message this conveys... |
by Loulou
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Wow great poem tim keep it up i love your writing |
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Yes...don't question God ... just believe in Him.. |
by Cloe
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Wow Tim, this is a Great poem... |
by ~*~Morgan~*~
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Wow...=)...wonderful poem! keep up the good work, i enjoy reading it. |