I like the way you have managed to infuse a little rhyme into such a short poem. great work!

shobhana

Wow, that was fantastic! Beautifully done, I love it!

Sounds like many a storm we have here in Florida....... very descriptive, wonderful write.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Beautifully written Rictameter... You've mastered the form so well!!

Are people making up these ways to write poems? Anyway I thought this one was great! Hope to see more!

Another excellent form!