Comments : Why didn't i see?

  • 18 years ago

    by molly

    Ok, so i know this isn't the best poem in the world, but this really happened to me, and i know i may not be the best writer, but it really helps to write my feelings down on here.
    please feel free to critisise, good or bad, all comments make me want to express my feelings a little more!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ambar K

    You know everything one writes is good, and especially if its true emotions what can be better then that. Keep it up