Yo that was sweet n cute.keep it up. n thanx 4 the ratings on my poem.w/luv *bouncy*

Hi, gd poem but u might wanna seperate lines so they're easier to read, just a suggestion and maybe right a bit more and with more feeling. it can do miracles to ur work. 4/5 please dont take offence

Hi, gd poem but u might wanna seperate lines so they're easier to read, just a suggestion and maybe right a bit more and with more feeling. it can do miracles to ur work. 4/5 please dont take offence