NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! the rhymingness! Blasted ryhmes lol.

Okay now that I've got that out of my system, Hi! lol interesting poem, I was distracted by the fact that it ryhmed but other wise... blah its ryhmes! lol sorry okay focus Jenn! the lines you are using for you MSN name:

Dead I am the sky,
Watching angels cry,
Laughing with no care,
Taking the biggest dare.

I love to pieces =) well done

heehee sorry for my spazieness I love you

Jenn

Beautiful, truly beautiful. I am sorry if this comment doesnt help much, but I dont know what to say to such an AWESOME poem...I would also say my fav part, but every stanza was awesome!

Hey, I like this one a lot, sometimes they just have to rhyme and I think you've done that successfully here without compromising the content. Well done,
*VioletRaven*

The only problem I had with your proem is the rhyming scheme.

It's not th poem itself, it just have to do with the poems that I prefer.

Something like
A
B
A
B

Would be nice for a change, however I love the topic too much to say more.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Poem*

You like the bunny, so I hope you don't mind seeing it twice. =P

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Well...I'd like it more with a few improvements..
First, the poem is in dire need of punctuation....Commas, Colons, etc.

Secondly, the stanzas are not in a consistent form. They should all be having four lines each or put in some other number.
Maybe it's just me but that's how I truly feel.
By the way, great subject, for the poem; nice try.

Love always,
Hareem.

Alil weird, but weirds good sometimes. but cool. good flow 5/5

What can I say, Mike, other than it was 'delightfully morbid'. Hurrah. Excellent work. One of my faves so far.

Cheers, Krystle

Pretty cool mike ;) lol I actually think that this kind of poem is really hard to write so good on you! keep up the good work!!! *smiles* xoxo

I loved this one too. The layout and the scheme of it kept my attention throughout it. I really liked how the character related themselves to something else. Keep up the good work. You have a lot of talent. *5/5*

Another grand poem. Keep writing.
Canada huh? where from?..

I love this poem, it has stuck in my head for awhile so i thought i would let you now that a enjoyed it tremendously