What;s going on here?

Your talking about cutting?
Since when?
You didn't use spell check, suicide was spelt wrong, The one line that says cut to feel the pain of death, and watch as the blood runs red, is out of the format of the rest of the poem, and hey! you're better than this, this is good, but if you could just try your length, you could be awesome.

*What's

Tay-man

Lol I was gonna say the same things as mike, but he beat me to it. Cutting isn't a good way to solve any kind of problem, and I would know... No matter what goes on in your life Taylor, write instead of cut, and talk to your friends and if Im completely braking up the wrong tree I'm sorry.

Poem wise: LENGTH!!! Are you doing this to drive Mike and I nuts? lol cause it working, then again Im already nuts... I loved the first and last line sex-cillent job =) keep it up I'm happy to see someone writing

Here if you need to talk
Jenn

He doesn't cut, I think he just really needed a topic.

Ooooh, very nice. I'm loving the imagery in this, it really jumps to life. Especially the first two lines, just wow!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Haha we both have a poem named burning.