Comments : Growing Old Together.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Well, I gave it 4/5 not bcuz its bad, just an opinion :)
    but hey I loved the ending it was lovely
    keep it up and good luck ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Beautiful Steve! Loving and caring... A true love without the "facade". Beautiful!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylead

    Not one for this type of poetry but ya it was good nice flow and made sense all the way through 4/5 here and if you get the chance rate and comment on my poem (phoenix) please

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Awww u made me cry....beautiful words 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    I loved this poem! It had so much emotion it was perfect! I loved it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Awww thiz poemz so beautiful....now thatz wat i call tru love well keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Makes me want to get out the photo albums ... and make a night of it! Very well done, full of emotion.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammy

    Awesome Steven! What a lucky lady.
    Beautiful dedication of love.
    Take care!

  • 17 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    Very emotional poem, I felt it.
    Good Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    You have a magnificent flow in your poems. Very easy to read. I loved this one.

    The theme of growing old together, well that chokes me up when I think of my grandparents.
    When grandpa passed away, my granny just stood there, looked at him, and I could have sworn, she smiled a bit.

    She must have been thinking something like this poem. She loved him so much and misses him a lot, and like in your poem, looks at the pictures and remembers.
    Thank you Mr. Bee

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiful story of love. Excellent imagery. Superbly written.

    Gracefully we journey and
    together we will grow old, I would
    not want it any other way. Loving
    you always even till the day I have to go.

    This stanza touched me so deeply.
    Take care Cindy