Comments : My Disfunctional Heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Tate LaBianca

    Very sad, it really rang true for me in some ways.

  • 18 years ago

    by XTaintedxBeautyX

    Very good poem, sad:'(... 5/5:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    I believe it is spelled "dysfunctional", maybe it can be both?

    Anyways, pretty good poem, I thought it was neat how the rhyming was completely cut off at the end. It really made your message stand out. Good job.