WOW jos..that was amazing.. one of ur best poems yet.
it's so incredibly true..wow i cant get over how could this is. Your pomes dont get near enough recognition as they should.
I hope you find a way to let it go, move on, and through it all ill always be by your side babe.
Love u heaps xoxoxoxoxo

Wow that seems to come right from the heart, great emotions and very well written( well i guess wen a poem comes from the heart its perfect in every sense)
5/5

xoxo
Diana