Brilliant. super imagery and a constant flow thoughout. well writen with amazing descriptions. appart from the 3 places where things like : Thatâ??s have occured a briliant peice.

5/5

Excellenet imagery and a nice flow to the poem!

lovely - i think you have enormous talent!

keep writing!
shobhana

I really like this poem. it it well wriiten and it has deep meaning.

I liked the beginning/ending stanza the best, but the rest of it was good too. The order of the words added a 'remembering' effect, I thought. 5/5.

I loved it, your wording was amazing. I loved that you did a poem about dragons. I thought it was nifty, and really well done.