A fantastic poem. You portray what I always try to get across to people but rarely succeed. Great Work Definite 5/5

By stupidity from all sides

- I really hate that spell checker... it murders my work every time! lol

Thanks anyway, muchos appreciated! This is one of my favourite poems, I just wish I could be this inspired again... :/

Hey thsi was really an inspiring poem, i really liked the message. greta work dear

all the best and take care

Chris,

I also hate the spell checker too sometimes. This was very deeply rooted and extremely powerful, a poignant choice of words. Well done!

Best regards,

Steve

Beauitfully penned, Chris.

"A fragmented unity
Society divided
The passionate teenager
Its tragic victim"

these lines are so true of the so called modern world that we are all invariably victims of.

great work; enjoyed reading this. Thank you very much for your comments on my work!

good lucka and keep writing

shobhana

This poem is pretty amazing

Brilliant Job here
I'm from almost near Derby!

All the Best
Sondos

Hey thank you so much for commenting on my poem :) lol not many ppl comment so its always so nice to hav some1 say something really good about something im proud of. I really like your poem, its so true, unfortunately..
anyway, hav a great day keep up the great writing :)

Fabulous and inspiring. haha, yeah, the spell check didn't exactly catch everything. But I totally got the point of your poem, and I liked it alot. hopefully this spark of devine creativity will revisit you someday.

Cheers thanks alot for the comments - another correction error I just noticed! Lol:

It's tragic victim
And it's frontline soldier

... Jeez... I really am getting sick of this thing butchering stuff, I'm gunna complain! :P

peace x

Another poem that i loved!

I REALLY LIKED IT!

Fantastic write 10/5