I very much like this poem. Very powerful, very meaningfull. The words are so nicely put together to make something so beautiful and yet so mature. Very nice

**Casey**

I've got to say the second verse is my fave, and I love your imagination! I have never seen a poem quite like this, it was interesting, I didn't want it to end. Very nice job.
~Jaime

Great work well done

This poem was totally awesome. You are a really great writter. Keep it up. Maybe you should try to enter some poems in writing contests. Just a suggestion.

I love this poem. You are very talented so keep up the good work. *5/5*

You are amazing!! the flow in this poem is perfect, the emotions so deep and raw and ... well, i just can't find the rihgt words.

great, great job my friend.

love and peace
shobhana

This one I have read a couple of times before. The title was eye catching and gave the first image, ver vivid and beautiful. Then came the words with very sad images. My fagvorite being the ocean which does seem to fit the part of, "The sea will wash away my hurt
With bitter honesty"
And the fire does seem to reignite things instead of always dying flames.