I love your poem! It shows expression and you say what you want people to see. Great poem! Could you maybe check out a few of mine? Thanks,
~brokenpieces38

Omg this is such a great poem....oh and um you wrote a comment about shattered pieces thanks but my dad doosent hurt me it's just the way i feel sometimes you know.......i don't know where it's from but i think it's from all the pain i've been through....your such a better poet then me...

Hello Ren

Who is depression indeed....

I love that you have personified this condition because for those who have suffered it, it really can feel like a physical enemy - so hard does it hit you. But that's what's so ultimately frightening: it affects you in a way you wouldn't think something that wasn't physical could. So, not physical, but real enough.
It is true, too, that it sneaks up on you and once it has been let in (which is normally beyond our control) it is very hard to stop and things just get worse.

Ren, your description in this poem is excellent - it made me shudder as I read it because it paints such a vividly truthful picture of this silent assassin.

All the very best and keep well,
Ben