Comments : Our Star

  • 18 years ago

    by Jeannette Lopez

    I really like this poem! It's true cuz it really relates to me!

  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    The pains of young love will haunt us all from time to time. don't worry kid it will get better.

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Other than a few of the lines feeling forced because of your strictly chosen rhyme scheme this piece is extraordinary. A lot of people can relate though it has a personal touch to it and your voice really shines through. Very well written.