Omg i love this, its so beautiful, its amazing! i love this part
And your heart will never be whole once more,
So take your pieces that are lying on the floor.
You've lost your reason, your will to fight,
The Devil has taken your soul tonight.

its a great poem ! keep it up comment on my poems sometime! -hayley

Your poem is surely unique, i really enjoyed reading this one...you choice of words give this poem a stronger deeper meaning!
p.s thanks for your comment (i fixed the error)
luv em

Damn gurl!
thats excellent. i love it
amy

Thanks so much!!!