Wow! its great although u have repeated quite a few times but i belive its the effect u wanted..right? woteva it is..i hope pj is safe and happy!

I love it soo much,and hey thanx for coming back in my life turning it upside down and leaving a again u r unbelieveable

U win i give up u beat me and there is nothing left u comeback in my life take what little i have left and leave again

Are you and pj now back together? i've been reading both your poems and i'm slightly confused!! it's a great poem though good work! take care xxx

I wish it was true sweetie i would have loved you forever, and you now it but if you choose another guy over me there is no coming back. and the sad thing about that is it will hurt me more than you.

I loved you more than myself

I love your poem. It's a great poem, by the way amazing write!!!!

I love your poem. It's a great poem, by the way amazing write!!!!