Comments : Beautiful Girl: Part I

  • 18 years ago

    by LossxOfxControl

    This was Wow! I can't wait to read teh next bit, post ASAP lol...

  • 18 years ago

    by brady haupt

    Omg... im speechless!!! that was unreal. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by DiscoBore234

    OMG!! U SUCK!!! Please quit posting poems on here....it's a disgrace to everyone that enjoys this web site...
    SOOOOO J/K! ITS GREAT!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Gooooo poet! lol...awesome... lets go part II! WHOOT! *grins*

  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    OMG, thats all I have to say,