Comments : In His Dreams.

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Beautiful Steve! it brought tears to my eyes!

    hope you have a rocking Valentine's this year and always!

    take care
    love and luck
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Deep and emotional poem Steven! You've written a magnificent piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Touches the heart Steven...a beautiful write....hope this will be the best Valentines ever.....
    love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    So sad, but sweet at the same time! Beautifully written, I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Roadrunner Chick

    I loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    You managed to evoke sentiment without seeming cliche or over-the-top. I love the subtlety of this and how REAL it feels..

  • 18 years ago

    by KJD

    WOW! awsome poem! I am so sorry you had to have such a lonesome v-day... It's always nice to have someone there for you, you know! I bet you v-day was awsome this year... Keep up the good work, you are a very very very good poet!

  • 18 years ago

    by hayley

    Unbelieveble. u really touched my heart with this poem. excellent. so sad but yet so good. keep up the good work1!!!!!!!. please check out some of my poems. "Never again" & " A dedication"

    lots of love
    hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Really pulls at the heart ... hope you had a better one this year. :)