This would make a awesome song
the title is perfect
i like that line
superbx.

SO good, it's weird how I could feel what you meant...anyway great job!-xx-

Wow.. Wonderful. And the sun really shines through this poem. Wonderful. Well done sweety! -xxx-

Cool poem,
I love the way you use your emotion to create masterpieces of literature.
Truely magnificent Kris....

Josh

Cool poem,
I love the way you use your emotion to create masterpieces of literature.
Truely magnificent Kris....

Josh

Cool poem,
I love the way you use your emotion to create masterpieces of literature.
Truely magnificent Kris....

Josh

Cool poem,
I love the way you use your emotion to create masterpieces of literature.
Truely magnificent Kris....

Josh