Comments : My body weight Vs gravity

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    I agree with james....great job on the poem, but as talented as you are, you could probably make it longer and it would be fantastic! hope evrythings goin well, later :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~XOHOLLYOX~

    Really deep poem eric

  • 18 years ago

    by eric

    Hey guys, your right it did need to be longer so i added a bit to it

    thanks for the comments :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Love it love it love it love it love it! lol Seriously, great job! Really liked it....and I was right, as talented as you are, you made it longer and it still rocked! :D So yeah, awesome job!