This was just so dark/sad and far sooo deep. loved it dear....

Your empty tears water this dirt,
And the empty words you whisper,
Serves nothing but to hurt.

wat an amazing words...could feel the pain right from heart to heart.

great work
all the best and take care
5/5

Great poem, I really liked it, from beginning to end. So I guess you are another person in this site who loves to write dark poems. You're good at it, so keep it up. 5/5

Thank you so much for commenting on mine.

Best wishes always :-)

I really like it write back to me if u want!!!

That was very good. Excellent write. Very dark and sad as well. I enjoyed reading this one.
~Unforgiven

Great poem.