I just wrote it out from my head right now. I know its pretty crappy... but oh well.. just wanna get stuff out for you guys and girls to read.. tell me what u think

I know just how that feeling can be like. This could help other people relate too. Good stuff.

Nice job...and you did really well on making the poem flow....nice pattern also...I LOVED IT!...keep it up!
~*Linz*~