Comments : Final Wish

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Wow very good...i like the way of seeing things...good job-xxxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    I hide my secret ever so preciously,
    I hide my past ever so maliciously,
    You leave me with feelings of insecurity.

    This is a great poem. Nice read. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jo

    Hey..well, it's obviously Jo! lol..n-e-wayz, nice poem! u did a great job on it..keep it up! :) *take care!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    Pretty good, check out some of my new stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ren

    Hey. Great Job!! You really expressed yourself and I love the way you chose your words! Awesome! Keep it up! Love always.