Comments : Emptiness

  • 18 years ago

    by Skye

    I love your poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, this is actually very powerful for ebing so short, I can relate to this one and I feel where you were coming from, The pain is obviously very deep here and this person has damaged you in many ways.

    Loved the use of the glass mirror metaphor, worked really well for your imagery and the point you were making.

    good work.