Wow. that was great. very flowing and descriptive. very deep. 5/5

love
lolli

p.s. i'm playing your game by the way

Brilliantly expressed and written.

5/5

Wow i love this you are excellent great job
looking forward to reading more

love always
tabby

Omg! amazing poem.
great use of words and emotion!
thanx for the comments on my poems btw!
love jess XxXxXxXx

Beautiful written.. I thank you for your kind words on my poem, its been awhile since somebody had spoken so kindly of one of them. And thank you for the advise.
Deepest thoughts- Miss Krueger.

It's good, not into it. But still good.

Well done..

Beautiful...enticing... touchin & deep
5/5
love
amy

The word choice is really good and deep as well as emotional. It does present a fantastic vivid image. The only things I would suggest might be to only stick to this format if you like it, for me it was a bit hard as I'm not a fan of it. Also maybe take out a word here and there such as:
Rivers running red as the Sky's turn black. Now this death has come taking a lover never to be back.

Maybe Rivers running (or run) as Sky's turns black. Now death has come taking a lover never to be back (or return)

The final 'thee' seems out of sorts with the rest of the poems language. 'You' would have been surfice.

The rest is very good, however.

Why is it that everyone tries to capture love in a message? you seem to be one of the few who actually gets it