Comments : Make believe world

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    Great poem I love it! It's so deep and I an tell he means alot to you! Good Job. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Hmm love this poem! it's really deep and I can relate to it very well!
    I like your writingstyle in all of your poems but this one in particular, Keep up the good work, =D I'll read some more of your work. Thank you for commenting on my poem.

    Much love, Ashley.

  • 18 years ago

    by beth

    Hey, I like the poem. As I read it it kinda reminded me of something my sister went through. (this is one of your best poems I think)

  • 18 years ago

    by Johnathan Shrum

    Hey ashley thats a good poem i really liked it it also sounds about like what im going through