Wow niceli written u sound like a miny shakespear....=) nice job and da last 2 sentence that's so cute 5/5...

Great imagination..shows true talent.

glad to hv u back after so long..hope everything is fine

take care and all the best

Nice poem.
:)
i love it
keep up the good work

Awesome. 5/5. I liked it. Are you going to put some music to it? If so i can help.
-Vino