:] this is a great comparison poem. good job i really really enjoyed it. very interesting and had some taste to it. ilike that.. keep writing.. your good at it :]
takecare, sarah

Hey hun that was really good i love the comparsion that u made really koool xoxo Rach

Lol thats so cute

Everyone has broken hearts its how life is..good poem

Hehe I like this. It's unique and sweet with a funny theme! Great work, take care
- Polly x