This was a really good poem and i loved it. Recently my boyfriend hurt me by saying he liked another girl but later said he lied. It really hurt me on the inside and this poem describes what I'm feeling. 5/5

This was 1 of the best poems i ever heard

Great use of imagery in this one, good job you lil shitfvck'r you :D

This is a great poem!!! it was sooo sad!
~*Katherine*~

This was ANOTHER AMAZING poem. i loved it!!!!
once again i can understand it from a girls point and a guys!

love it!

TaKe CaRe,,

LoTa LoVeN,,

T!FF@N!

Wow thats awesome, very emotional, strong and its amazing

Another of my favorites. Really good rhyming. It makes so much sense its crazy. I love it!

Keep repeating the second stanza ... for in it is the hope! Nice write.

Wow ! another great poem
love ur style of writing... im addding u to my favs
voted u 5/5 again
love
amy

That was great. i loved the last two lines. they are so powerful and it just adds to the poem. great write.
Emma 5/5

This is sad..Really good though! 5/5 Keep ya head up =]

luv natz x0x

Ahhh my brother!