Absolutely awesome yet again 5/5

Blease:)

Ohhh this has to go in my favourites!! oh my god :(

Not only this is just so easy to relate to it is so moving. And I read it over and over and do you know what I noticed... see if you were to turn this around and make that into a second stanza or seperate poem, it would be the opposite ways in which you were stating but with the same affect. Like...

When I'm alone, I think of you
I think of you when I'm alone

When I cry, I remember you
When I remember you I cry

When I smile, I miss you
I miss you when I smile

When I sleep, in my dreams, I see you
I see you in my dreams when I sleep

When I look at your picture, I feel you
I feel you when I look at your picture.

When I look around, I can't find you
I can't find you when I look around.

dont ask me why this popped into my head, but it did and I thought I would share it as found it very interesting as I have never came across any other poem you could do that with. Would perhaps be a challenge for many to attempt such a poem.

Anyway, really liked this and could picture it as a little verse on a card.

Loved it ... and just loved it.