You let that anger out!
That was pretty good well done.

I think its good, full of emotion which is what makes a great poem:) thanks for the comment xx

I loved this poem so much! its so dark and raw! i would normally put my fave bit, but i think it wud b a VERY long comment if i put the hole damnd poem here! and i dont think ur sh*t @ ritin, i love ur style, its always dark and deep and intriguing. well, i think so newaz.

gr8 work as always, keep goin!!!

Forsaken Redeemer
xXx

This was really dark, a lot of anger coming across in this poem. Well done, I don't think it's sh*t at all, don't tell yourself that. Keep writing,
*VioletRaven*

I like how it was written, very dark and yet a great write. I love how you put together all your words. Keep writing.5/5