Wow yuniardi, I really liked this poem.
you know I loved the meaning and the way you wrote it. I loved the way you started and ended it. and it has a great title as well. I really enjoyed reading this.
have a wonderful day,
marjan

Great work.. I like the peaceful and calming mood you painted... forcing different perspective on things... bringing out the hope of innocence and purity in humanity. Keep up the great work... I see talent in you... keep writing. 5/5

BEAUTIFUL, NICE, FANTASTIC :D
-Mia-

Hey, this is beautiful!

if only the snow can say
and the wind can sing
will they lend me a secret...
another aspect of this life..

this line is beuatifully written; the whole poem is wonderfully expressed.

thanks a lot for your comments on my work!

look forward to reading more of yours

good luck and peace
shobhana

Such a beautiful poem, like ^^ I loved the section,

if only the snow can say
and the wind can sing
will they lend me a secret...

So beautiful, paints such a lovely picture. Really well written - thanks.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow this is beautiful. every line seems thought out to have the greatest affect which it does. i love it